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[ART]Blue sky

Update 1


Update 2


To do:
1. Fix masking around the arm.
2. Smoothen the background rocks.
3. Lighten up dark cloud.
4.
5.


Stock:
http://darkdevil16.deviantart.com/ar...tock-273653117
http://joannastar-stock.deviantart.c...bg-02-59340548
http://jaymasee.deviantart.com/art/Nereid-2-260177976

My first attempt at doing something like this :S
CnC welcomed and appreciated.
Made with Photoshop CS4
Last edited by Lazors; Jul 6, 2012 at 09:52 PM.
Brendan (he who passeth judgement on the frequent changing of signatures): I don't do hentai anymore
Bottom half is really good, the top half has kind of too watery colors, and I can see some sharp edges around the moon(?) and trees. The moon should also be sharper at the edges (even through fog) and you should not be able to see stars through it. You could probably see it reflecting on the water around the rocks as well. Oh, and add reflections of the stars on the water too.

Also I think the weirdness of the colors is partially from that fantasy sky stock, it's just not a good stock because the "clouds" don't really blend well with everything else. I don't really know how to explain it but they look weird.
Last edited by Clockwork8; Jun 25, 2012 at 07:47 PM.
It's amazing how much talent people must have to acomplish such a great thing ...
10/10

But maybe you can show the girl's face next time? :x
Woah, this is nice.
This surely stuns me. The trees, the sky, the woman, was all done very nice.

10/10 There's seriously no down-side to this...

Originally Posted by Pheyli View Post
It's amazing how much talent people must have to acomplish such a great thing ...
10/10

But maybe you can show the girl's face next time? :x

No, it would take away from the atmosphere and there's no point in showing it. It would be just for the sake of showing it and make the viewer feel like an object of the girl instead of just observing distantly.
*UPDATE*

Update 2


Thanks for the criticism, it helps me a lot.
As said, it's my first attempt at merging pics together in Ps.
Last edited by Lazors; Jul 6, 2012 at 09:49 PM.
Brendan (he who passeth judgement on the frequent changing of signatures): I don't do hentai anymore