great stuff
a bit rough around the edges, your freecamming feels a bit less controlled, slow the camera work down, and go for smoother and cleaner lines and angles, focus more on the art and cinematography of it etc
liked the intro, think it went on for a replay or two long, didnt think the "hope you enjoy" text did anything for it, if anything, it takes away from the intro.
also klaypex <3 i like how you worked the sync and layout around the vid, your use of sync could be a little more defined, using it more consistantly, rather than lots of little areas to perfectly match the music, let the replay do some of that.
loved the cutscene bits around the 1: 30 mark
i think your work is a bit rough, but if you start talking with other vid makers during the production process, like slycooper and tengo seem to be doing, you can clean your work up nicely
Last edited by BenDover; Sep 9, 2012 at 01:00 PM.