I loved the opener, it was very smooth, but at 850 there was a part that felt a lttle uncomfortable. I think the legs tucked up too quickly without anything else moving and it didn't fit in very well.
I really didnt like the launch to the first kick. I think you were trying to not 'go with the flow' by going the opposite way to whats normal, but it really didn't look good in my opinion.
The split was nice. I'm not opposed to one dm hits, this one was fairly smooth and I liked it.
The control after was ok. The first part didn't look natural, a bit flail-y. But when you found your feet, you really found your feet. The set up to the crotch kick was absolutely beautiful. Very very nice.
The hand dm and skeet sucked. Very hold-all. Way too stiff. It was so smooth until that point. The skeet didnt even dm.
I liked the final pose, but I dont really like the way you got into it. The spin on one foot was kimda cool, but when you kicked your other foot down to stop the spin, the speed of the kick was too unnatural. Make the pose one of the most realistic aspects of the replay.
But the pose was actually cool ;)
I like it, keep it up. 8/10