Tbh this is one of the greatest things Ive seen in the art board for a while. I love the effect you added to the bg to make it look like the sun was hitting the camera. Also great affects on the tori but you need to work on your cropping skills (the feet look meh). The only problems with this is that I cant read the text and it cant fit on my screen D:
Great job dont ever give up
*middlef inger* the haters
also have you ever considered opening a shop?