Wow. I was nowhere NEAR that good when I had been playing for about 5 months. The opener was generic; try not to just bend over for a starter. I liked the jump, but then you just skimmed Uke's hip and stopped your flow by switching directions. The hit was okay; you hit wrist first and the dismemberment was delayed. I didn't really like the kick, because you kicked with your shin. I didn't like how you stopped your flow and then just picked up Uke's remaining body parts. However, I did like how you tied the last punch into the ending pose. It was pretty epic.
Really good job. I was still doing body breakers and 3 part tears when I had been playing as long as you have.