I really like how it goes from light to dark and complex to simple from top to bottom. Really keeps your attention on his face. The colours are really nice too. Has some interesting hues going on there.
No major flaws to me, as far as nitpicking goes his right boot seems blurred compared to his left one (Probably because the highlights aren't as strong). But that seems to be happening because of your light source. Also his left sleeve looks odd to me. Don't know why though, I thought it was because there's no major bulge/wrinkles for the hand. But when I tried to do what he's doing with my hoodie there weren't any major bulges for the hand.
Overall I'd say good job. No comments for Vergil since it isn't loading for me (Found Dante on your DeviantArt).