This wasn't very bad.
The opener was a bit awkward, with your arms flaring around
The kicks were decent
Try not to twitch as much as you did in the ending.
Also, you grabbed too much.
7/10
Apperciate the comment!
So I guess I should go for a more realistic, smooth, look?
Rather than an "awkward-flaring-twitchy", replay with to much grabbing. xD I'll work on it. =D