how would i make this better anyone know? :/ i need advice

Audio reaction :333
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Oh, thought you made this with something like trapcode form or particular.
Even though it's smoke video footage with a text mask, it works well.

Goddamn you.
Now I want a cigarette, lol.
Looks quite good! (Coming from someone who knows nothing about video editing)
Also, Raise Your Weapon is a great song.

lol thank you :P

I think if you sped it up just a tad it would look just a bit better, but that's just me.

how bout this im tryin to make this look cool but blah idk what to do....
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blah i think the quality should be better :/