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boStaff and the Terrible, Horrible, No Good, Very Bad Replay Thread
so i make replays sometimes, take a look, cnc, those things
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#bo_heelpower.rpl (98.9 KB, 21 views)
#bo_karma.rpl (44.0 KB, 17 views)
#bo_playing dead.rpl (54.6 KB, 13 views)
#bo_roughdick.rpl (116.9 KB, 15 views)
#bo_whisked.rpl (126.0 KB, 12 views)
shmevin eats smegma
#bo_roughpenis

Opener was unique in a weird way.. I liked something about it though.
Splitcap was fine, nice combo.
The decap could've looked better if it would've ghosted through more(Making it look less messy)
unique replays, yet cool.
'u'
swear to god, nobody ever visits my replay threads


bump, i need cnc or i'll never get better :/
shmevin eats smegma
well this place is pretty much dead right now

I really liked heelpower to be honest, I don't see any glaring flaws. It's one of those replays where it's too simple to even find flaws in them. Nonetheless, tasty spin and the decap wasn't any worse, clean and powerful as hell.

karma was just funny, the decap itself was once again clean and well aimed. Not much to say on this one, pretty straightforward.

You did look a bit too limp on playing dead, specially during the opener. I liked how you fell to the ground and made a kick out of it, but that's my opinion, many people will tell you that falling to the ground isn't very good.
The kick was really solid, very nice penetration you got there. I'm sure you can do a bit more with the replay though, I would if I could. But again, that's just me and my itch to destroy Uke.

roughdick's opener was a bit slow. Also, if you don't want to have your head wobbling around try to extend/contract/hold it.
I really liked how you used your other leg to get momentum, and you made good use of your free arm as a support. Pose was great.

On whisked, your legs looked twitchy during the opener. I usually try to plan ahead a bit and see if I need to contract a knee or arm early on, so I don't have to contract and extend it in a very short time.
Split was beautiful, and I find it very impressive how you reversed your flow and still got off the ground with enough momentum to kick the shit out of Uke's head, in -30.
Very nice replay.


Overall, I don't have much to say because you already seem to know what you're doing. Just keep going.
oh yeah
thanks pusga, from what I've seen you're a pretty great replay maker so your advice I'll take strongly... I'll bump when I make a new one in a little while
shmevin eats smegma
They were all pretty plain and lacking some flow and style. Work on your poses as well. So far your doing well, but take a little more time on your replays.
~Jucke