You should really up the FPS, it looked way too jumpy.

Hi, You should speed up the FPS a little bit

Oh god, why is it so choppy?
Yeah, do what they said.
From 0:18 to 0:26, that one camera angle just felt way too boring to watch, I think you should've just transitioned into the next replay a lot faster.
As for the camera-work, the angles and positions you move the camera into are pretty bad. Try not to move too far out, or move the camera around too suddenly.
Also, the constant Old-fashioned TV-like effect kinda got old after 20 seconds of it.

5 seconds*
Generic dubstep wub whatever music, no sync, nothing exciting or different
about the video, it's basically like almost every other dumb toribash video that people nowadays make.

Also it may have just been me, but there was this weird song jump/cut that
didn't sound natural at all, it was somewhere in the beginning I know that.

Okay looking back on it there's definitely a really weird awkward jump cut in the
music that doesn't sound good.