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[Tex] My First Set
Hello to all!
I present to you my very first set/texture made ​​entirely by me.(currently in WIP)
I created this thread to get opinions, recommendations and improvements and an eventual price for this set.
Be tough, your constructive criticism will help me a lot
From 1 to 10 how do you like? thanks
P.S: Sorry for my bad english :<

Program used: Photoshop CS6

Texture size: full 512x512

Set



UPDATE!
Version 2.0 here! brought some improvements, Type: texture outline, better mapping of the head + other details, new arms, Texture clean.

SET v2.0



Things to Do:
-Better mapping of the head
-add detail to the hands and arms
-add details to the rest of the texture
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I like it! It has that "neony" feel, but the legs are just c/p and the edges looks rough?
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Originally Posted by smosh023 View Post
I like it! It has that "neony" feel, but the legs are just c/p and the edges looks rough?

Thanks!
1) the legs are not c/p I did some sketches with Adobe illustrator and then apply it on photoshop with the modification of some brushes

2)yes,I applied a rough texture, to give that extra touch ... do you think that is not good?
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the tribal brushes could have been used more effectively, the individual brushes are still quite recognisable.
the mapping of the head could be improved
and the arms and hands definitely need something more

but i like the finish, looks pretty
looks like you had a good idea, then got lazy
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Originally Posted by BenDover View Post
the tribal brushes could have been used more effectively, the individual brushes are still quite recognisable.
the mapping of the head could be improved
and the arms and hands definitely need something more

but i like the finish, looks pretty
looks like you had a good idea, then got lazy

I really appreciate your advice, I try to apply it
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if you are interested in continuing to work with tribals and brushes, try having a look at my tutorial
http://forum.toribash.com/showthread.php?t=282162
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I like it, the head, torso and hands look very nice.
I dislike the legs honestly, they look a bit plain in my opinion and the arms really just don't fit the set.
All of the other tribal lines look much thicker than the lines on the arms.
I'm very impressed though, if this is really your first set then you've done a great job. 7

As for price, I would pay somewhere between 10-20k if I was interested in it.
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First? Well, not really bad, it's obviously a tribal, right?
Well, i've liked it, some parts have a lot of details, but some parts have bad mapping too, in the case of the arms, i don't even know what is that... But the rest seems ok.
Keep making and improving, you can got some TC selling sets like this.
7/10
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Originally Posted by aracoon View Post
I like it, the head, torso and hands look very nice.
I dislike the legs honestly, they look a bit plain in my opinion and the arms really just don't fit the set.
All of the other tribal lines look much thicker than the lines on the arms.
I'm very impressed though, if this is really your first set then you've done a great job. 7

As for price, I would pay somewhere between 10-20k if I was interested in it.

7 out of 10 is very high for me, thanks

I will follow your advice, I'm editing the arms, I'm trying to add too much detail as possible. thanks again
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Originally Posted by Sainzgc View Post
First? Well, not really bad, it's obviously a tribal, right?
Well, i've liked it, some parts have a lot of details, but some parts have bad mapping too, in the case of the arms, i don't even know what is that... But the rest seems ok.
Keep making and improving, you can got some TC selling sets like this.
7/10

7/10 woah, thanks.

I am currently modifying the arms and other parts of the body... :<
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UPDATE!
Version 2.0 here! brought some improvements, Type: texture outline, better mapping of the head + other details, new arms, Texture clean.

Set v2.0



I can consider one of these objectives complete? If yes, which?

objectives:
-Better mapping of the head
-add detail to the hands and arms
-add details to the rest of the texture


other advice? Thanks :< ( the v2.0 it's better or no? D: )
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I agree, I really Like the neon affect. But i feel the legs and torso are just too plain. other than that it looks great for your first set.


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