Wow this must be so embarrassing for you - if you know these people.
Ok, first one turned out ok - except the hair. And then you went and added a really out of place monocle. Went from ok to crap.
Second one have a weird perspective on the details. Details also have so much detail the rest looks sloppy. (what is that? A cable??)
Last one is just plain weird - not sure what's happening there. She doesn't really look startled, like the bubble suggests.
Jalis: Freelancer, you're a duck | Sachi: Freelancer, you're a duck | Reanimator: Freelancer, you're a duck
satiknee: Freelancer, you're a duck | Wiggi: Freelancer, you're a duck | Tarlan: Freelancer, you're a duck