Thanks for posting Erth, and thanks to the artists, writers and editors for making this first issue possible :-)

Very nice Erth
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and the entire crew aswell

Would be nice with a bit more art and stuff, like the old ToriNews. Interesting nonetheless.

I liked it quite a bit. Colorful writing is great.

Nice job everyone.

I like this a lot keep up the good work guys.

My favorite part was when you used hampa's face in the Dev's Thoughts header.
Marvelous, it was all well just to get up to that.

I don't know why, but it is quite uncomfortable to read from a pic. Perhaps this is just me.
One note: try to keep information up-to-date. This is News, and The Game event is written as an "upcoming thing" (though it's almost over).
And edit typos before posting, uuuuh.

Agreed. The section regarding The Game I assume was written before hand an no one bothered to rewrite or update it when the issue was being put together.

Also you have a pretty hefty list of editors, you'd think spelling errors wouldn't be an issue.

A+ on the hompo graphic.

I'm with sir. It'd be nice to see it in a .pdf format. Also, in terms of critique, a little light and maybe rushed for a first addition. It didn't have much in terms of content when you consider the two interviews with Hampa could have been done as one piece, the first interview was recycled from a blog post and the Game info was outdated. Nonetheless an interesting read. I'll certainly keep a watch for future posts.