You need to improve on.....
Everything.
This looks like 30.00 wushu. This wasn't a very enjoyable spar. The only good part is that you both came back to each other.
Next time you spar, be yourself, but imagine the other sparring replays and don't do the polar opposite.
Don't try to make a replica of the replay, though. Only your imagination will tell you what you can do.
Watch for any weird things that will make you look ugly. Don't ignore most of your joints.
Anyway, I didn't like the whole spar, because it was mostly cluttering and I didn't know what was going on. The way you jumped into the air with your toes was really disgusting.
The start of the replay looked like a mirror, and it wasn't too detailed either. Try to think of better ways to make contact. If there were anything such as good punches, I would expect something like a creative spar.
Overall, the replay was meh, 3/10
Everything.
This looks like 30.00 wushu. This wasn't a very enjoyable spar. The only good part is that you both came back to each other.
Next time you spar, be yourself, but imagine the other sparring replays and don't do the polar opposite.
Don't try to make a replica of the replay, though. Only your imagination will tell you what you can do.
Watch for any weird things that will make you look ugly. Don't ignore most of your joints.
Anyway, I didn't like the whole spar, because it was mostly cluttering and I didn't know what was going on. The way you jumped into the air with your toes was really disgusting.
The start of the replay looked like a mirror, and it wasn't too detailed either. Try to think of better ways to make contact. If there were anything such as good punches, I would expect something like a creative spar.
Overall, the replay was meh, 3/10
私の顔にそれを言う。
For a first try u was normal but omega say the truth u don't need to say sorry for that because you're newbie at sparring, everyone who's playead spar was newbie and bad, btw 2.9/10