Super punch 1: Great replay! Altough, in the opener, you leg contracted and it looked kinda weird. The flow after that was good, but your abs were overextended and it didn't look good. Everything after that was good. The punch was great! After you did the spin, you should have gone straight into the pose, try not to mess around too much. Overall, 7/10
Super punch 2: Pretty good, the opening bit was kind of odd, but effective. Try to make it look as realistic as possible by holding and relaxing. It didn't look very realistic when your arm was lowered. Great punch and good pose. Overall 8/10
Super punch 2: Pretty good, the opening bit was kind of odd, but effective. Try to make it look as realistic as possible by holding and relaxing. It didn't look very realistic when your arm was lowered. Great punch and good pose. Overall 8/10
Ryan is Straight {TGS} {Videoer} {Artist} Rip Dog
Super punch: The opener could be smoother, you rotate the chest all the way to the right and keep it there for several frames, which makes it look slightly stiff when you finally rotate it the other way. Nice clean punch, just the right power for a simple decap, not so powerful you'd wish it were a boom. Nice pose too.
Super punch 2: I like the buildup, but I find the angle that the punch connects at is weird considering the trajectory. It's a wide hook from the side, but you aim it at Uke's front. Nice pose again, but you move a bit awkwardly in the air, first pretty much hold-alled with glutes extended all the way and then moving everything abruptly.
Super punch 2: I like the buildup, but I find the angle that the punch connects at is weird considering the trajectory. It's a wide hook from the side, but you aim it at Uke's front. Nice pose again, but you move a bit awkwardly in the air, first pretty much hold-alled with glutes extended all the way and then moving everything abruptly.
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