I really love the transitions between 0:24 and the part at 0:09
Sync's incredible for a 1ce, but it's a little boring with the lack of effects, I'd suggest adding more next time.
The colour correction is perfect, I can see you used magic bullet looks V420evoblazeitedition, but there are some problems, such as the lens flare looking a bit odd and not bright enough. I do love the text you're using though, it's high quality and actually readable unlike some videos.
Good work on the video man