Hey, this is really my first ever serious drawing I tried to sit down and do. It isn't finished yet. I want to add some shading or colors. You guys tell me what I should do. Please hit me with the CnC. I need the help as it being my first.

First we would need your source of work, because we don't know what your aiming for :>
Anywhosies, the shading for the neck gets waaay to dark making it look somewhat dirty (lol). Head is oddly shaped, but the hair and facial features are well done. I would re-do that head before coloring. Good job keep up the good work.

I wouldn't say the head is oddly shaped! The neck has that shading issue but nothing too hard to fix ;) The eyes. Eyes are kind of hard for me. Something that seems to work for me is to have a little more outline on them. And start out making them smaller and work your way bigger to where it seems good.

The shading is a tiny bitt odd as it is for now. I like the pieace atleast. And as it is your first pieace it's remarkably good.