Toribash
yeahh
sorry xD how the hell do you move?
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Alright since its moved let the comments begin :3?
Last edited by bazoozo; Jan 20, 2014 at 06:45 AM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
I guess I'll start off the comments.
Opener was generic and the wrist randomly flicked at the start too, but the back-jump into the split kick was nice.
The way you got uke's torso in the air looked a little weird,and the decap follow up looked a little weird too (mostly because of the arms). Also you hit your head.
The way you went into the last kick was just straight to the point, which was cool. Nothing really wrong with that.
The pose transition was messy, the wrist flicked you up, and your arms were generally twitchy, and your chest did a sudden movement too.
Personally i think it would have been cooler if you posed with your foot on his head,
rather than kicking it but that's just me.

7/10

You don't seem bad, but it seemed like you got lazy with some parts of the replay.
Good job though, keep making replays and good luck. ^^
I like your movement. But you are a bit stiff, mostly towards the end, making your whole body look twitchy. Try relaxing more often and letting joints move how they want. Remember not to use too much ore you will be all floppy.

Meeska
use a nice contrast of hold and relax.

6.5/10
Keep practicing. I don't want you to get the wrong idea, so i'll say now its a pretty good replay.
New Replay!
I just made a quick replay since my curfew is near xD
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Bump. I guess this is the start of my thread dying?
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Last edited by bazoozo; Jan 22, 2014 at 10:28 AM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump