not really great work

Tams, things like this go in the Art sub section. Ill move it there for you.

i feel like this picture is the monster under my bed 10/10 2 spooky 4 me

Since it's in art board, you should add the programs used to create the artwork.
Also, edited the tag for you.

i dont really like it but,you should try to remove the white line on the tori >.>

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This is terrible! Why would anyone EVER want to post this into the internet for over seven billion people see for the rest of the life of the internet?
The tori is poorly cut out - you didn't even try to fix that. At all.
The flames aren't lit. They emit no light what so ever.
The head texture looks like you googled an image and just resized it to fit a head.
You know what you are? An insult to those who work hard to achieve perfection. Those who work hours to figure out how to appeal to the public. How to send their message through their creation.

This is not art. This is murder. If you wish to continue making art and call it art: Work harder. Much much harder.

Dude those copy paste skills.

Seriously, you didn't properly cut out the tori, google images head and free is right, the flames are way too dull.

Freelancer probably scared this guy off of toribash,
I think that comment was unnecessarily mean haha.
Yes this is quite awful but in his defense...


He posted it online because he thought it was cool yo,
It's poorly cut out but there's worse, MUCH worse,
He probably doesn't know much about lighting,
The head is clearly the basic "tori" texture that was added in 4.2 or something,
Rather than an undermining him pointlessly I'd call him new to art,
And he didn't actually call it art so that may cheer you up .

As for the op, I'd say work on your editing a bit, that head looks to big compared to a normal tori head :P.