I started making a replay and I'm kind of new and need some help. Here is what I have so far:

I know there is ghosting out the ass, cant hep it.

the spin looked weird.

I liked your spin but you held it for a bit too ling and ended up not really doing anything after it. :c

hi rawwrh, im going to hurt you with this 1 sorry.

opener very fucking gneric really dont do this.

spin was shit and the form was terrible

manip was a bit odd

dont ghost.
hold your neck.
dont be so floaty
DONT BE SO FUCKING STIFF.

I need the harshness, it will help me improve.

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spin body split v2.rpl