Toribash
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[Art] Grand Theft Auto Online Character
Heres a drawing I've made of my GTA O Character, I know theres a fair bit I could have done better, but CnC, and if this is in the wrong place for this thread, I'm happy to take it down. Whatcha think? (Sorry if I haven't posted this correctly, I don't often post here)

Character



A few details incase you wanted to know \/

Program Used: Photoshop CS5.1
Time Spent: 2 Hours 16 Minutes
Xbox Live Name: xXBlurSyncXx
Last edited by Arthur; Apr 24, 2014 at 11:01 PM.
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that fixes your problem?
Last edited by Forex; Apr 21, 2014 at 09:06 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump

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Last edited by Forex; Apr 23, 2014 at 12:28 AM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
+ Definitely has the 3D look into it + Shadows are in the right places

- I Think the thing he's wearing on his head is small,the shadows and details look more like dirt.Too much visible creases and ears look like a bulge/bump and lastly,neck's a bit too long.
it looks like you drew over a picture with really thick lines and colored it
if you did it would help to see the original picture
mouse work?
it is looks like a mouse work.

try to refine the lines, single lines must end all thin
the outile has to have work too and so the shading.
lol… I copied (not traced) a selfie of my Online character. I only have a trackpad to draw with, as I use a mac… There were no "effects" used, and the thing on his head is a beanie. I use Photoshop a lot for things other than drawing, since drawing with a trackpad is near impossible.

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