http://www31.zippyshare.com/v/32167074/file.html

here is copy of my second complete track. Simply rate it, and if you can give me some advices on how to make it better, how to master it (i hear distortions on mid and high tones) blah blah

-Fl Studio
-Potatoes

7/10
If you were going for the big room house genre of music you're doing pretty good. Instead of using a super saw as a lead try using a percussion sound.

The drop was pretty good. You need to master the riser to be more crisp. Shove an para EQ-2 on the leads/riser and make the high ends about 6.5k hz.

Overall it's a good start. I'm a pro with Fruity loops so if you need help just pm me.

Thanks. I will