Originally Posted by Kradel

Should be in Music session. I guess all the other rap threads have died so I will start this off:

I'm a natural sound artist.
'Cause of all the skill I harvest.
This moment is your darkest.
Definitely not your smartest.
So why don't you turn back.
You're heading down the wrong track.
I honestly think you should kick back.
This genre isn't one you can hack.

'Cause with your type of skill, there is no chance you can succeed.
You're lucky your not a kid in Asia forced to make your girlfriends beads.
You don't understand lyrics, you just rap about getting money and weed.
Blank yourself please, before future rappers start to follow your lead.
Now it's time you know I will take you down because I am your predator.
I have much more talent than you, I create music and I'm an editor.
Stop repeating the same bars to each and every competitor.
You're not original, you need to learn, you really need an educator.

Originally Posted by Hlmaster

So, you want to rhyme?

Fine, but don't complain when the hip and the hop
blow away your mind.
My rhyme mindfucks your thoughts of time, it's almost like a crime.
you can notice how life says you goodbye.
This thread might soon be closed, nice try, but the mods won't let stupidity pass by.
But don't be mad if it happens, it does sometimes,
Just don't whine while you explain things why.

Cya, kthxbye.
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And you're who to say such things into waste?
Asians always gonna have someone to overcome your skill and hate.
what lacks in you is your humility and some common sense.
but fuck it, because my rhymes strike you so hard and so dense,
you can't even feel your heartbeat, hence,
I'm going easy on your for this first time,
you say you're godly pro but you lack true life rhymes.
Don't blame on the weed or you might get fuck'd up
since when talented people keep saying they're the best? shut up.
you're nobody, I'm nobody and we are one,
but I'm me, and against me, you're done.

Originally Posted by Kradel

Should be in Music session. I guess all the other rap threads have died so I will start this off:

I'm a natural sound artist.
'Cause of all the skill I harvest.
This moment is your darkest.
Definitely not your smartest.
So why don't you turn back.
You're heading down the wrong track.
I honestly think you should kick back.
This genre isn't one you can hack.

'Cause with your type of skill, there is no chance you can succeed.
You're lucky your not a kid in Asia forced to make your girlfriends beads.
You don't understand lyrics, you just rap about getting money and weed.
Blank yourself please, before future rappers start to follow your lead.
Now it's time you know I will take you down because I am your predator.
I have much more talent than you, I create music and I'm an editor.
Stop repeating the same bars to each and every competitor.
You're not original, you need to learn, you really need an educator.

Originally Posted by lukeypow

You guys are both stuck on masturbation cant even understand a simple equation the frustration your creating your both only good for hating....

on toribash both your fuckin brains clash we already have a nicki minaj and a drake you fakes joining a rap battle what a mistake!



i dont meen to be mean but your both a bitch version of charle sheen drinkin till your fuckin brains wiped clean you cant try to rejoin my family youve been out since i had an epifiny i apologize for this negativity but i have to get it out dont you see you did this to me! held me in captivity!
you expect me to
love you when you were a bitch to
me vicously
you dont even have any mother fuckin dignity
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your a disgrace to the human race a waste of space how did you find this thread i was hoping you were dead not alive tryna bribe my ass to relive you of pain then deceive you in front of a train while you stand in the rain tryna get back up from the track since i been writing im like thunder and lightnin ill never fade unlike you i dont need a page on the stage nicolas stage going back with his meme face making new cards and im smashing your tori sending glass shards for yours you cant even rap your own bars

listen i dont ned a religion or to be christian to take a proposition like a polotition who will erase you like a demolition my ambition will get you before i do!
i wont fuck you like the other guys do!
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i dont need an educator your styles been wiped with used toilet paper
i can destroy you subliminaly the rape you. litarally.
i dont give a shit about your style or what you can do lyrically
and you can create idiotic conspieracies and i finish my letter ill make sure its to you specifically and for the doctor il leave a note saying youve been damaged critacally

Originally Posted by T0ribush

I hope you kids had your fun because you'll be dropping
As fast as stones when I'm done and through with you fools
Using mastercraft grammatical tools plus 5 with skills
None of you competitors ever seen before
I'm at the very tip top of the hip hop mountain peak
I've raised the bar with bars so hard I'm off the charts and
Today will be the day I put an end to these brain rotting ways
So quit with the random spray as I lay you all to rest
With precision aim followed by the force of a freight train

Originally Posted by Kradel

You call him a disgrace? You can't even write a grammatically correct sentence.
Other than your bad bars, what disgusts the most is your presence.
You realize just you being here attracts bad thoughts.
Worse than the thoughts Nazi's attracted during the Holocaust.
You attract innocence that thinks to like you.
Hold up, I said that backwards.
You like to think that innocence attracts you.
It doesn't in fact, it hates you like it hates complaints coming from fat dudes.
Fix your problems, were not talking math but change too,to,two.
Just like them, your too lazy to do anything about your problems.
Complain constantly and hope Jesus comes down and solves them.
You say you won't fuck people like other guys do?
But you will get fucked by other guys the way gay guys do.
Wordplay isn't my strong point but it's great to use.
'Cause idiots like you don't understand a word I produce.
Slow down, hold it back. Take your religious bar again.
Then you can can start to feel, every Christians revenge.
Now, sit down, please. I would like to present.
Me, the best rapper here, a gifted decent.

Yeah, wordplay is very fun when used correctly :3 I highly suggest it. Here is a good example of an amazing wordplay:

Since you act like the big guy in a dinosaur film.
You can share the same fate of those who 'die-in-a-saw' film.

Originally Posted by KillerBotX

Having the day of your life? Well im ganna end it.
And when you wake up your going to feel the hiccup
of me killing you inside with with my raps.
So suck it messed up peak, with the games that you sneak
That's right you have a big height fright so when you see me
you will wee. Had enough? Are you Tough? not really because
you shove!