So, it's the first big thing I made in ableton and I feel p good about it
I know trap isn't Toribash's thing anymore but I'm a trap produces

http://m.soundcloud.com/legolden-1/b...early-complete

I'll finish this wip tomorrow or so

I like it Yeah, not many Toribash plays like Trap but I do and I think this is awesome!on the drop I noticed a weird fade out at the start of the kick drum? It sounds weird becayse it makes the song volume decrease. Still a nice drop though. Liked and Folliwed

Gimme a download link when your down?

0:50-end was really overpowering and annoying
loved the beginning but that high pitched voice thing is overused and doesn't add much
you're really good at making things flow until you faded out at about 0:42-ish
my rate is okaytrap/goodtrap

Seems like 0:00-0:18 and 0:40-0:58 is just sped up version of the original.
Best part 0:19-0:39, rest just sucks imo.
sry

i dont like the high pitched voice
you should lower it or something

Depends though, with trap, a low pitched vocal means a heavy, low pitched drop while high pitched voice can relate to something much more chill or high pitched. That's not exactly a rule but I notice it in trap tracks or songs.

You really could improve it a lot by adding more kicks, right now there is just Kick, Snare.. If you add like Kick Kick Kick, Snare.. it should make it more trap like. But keep it up, it seems interesting

Thanks guys, the original song had the high vocals so I'll keep working on the buildup and the drop

Yeah so the idea is in a way ok but there a few mixing problems. For example the snare is way too overpowering and the bass makes the mix a bit muddy.