god no
the intro text is hideous, i dont know why you made it like that
having all 3 of them trick to the LEFT of the screen was ugly looking, along with the overlays you put on top of these clips
fatul being greenscreened in didn't even have the same light effects from the game on his tori
transitions are poorly done, they don't even create any flow
yeah this was mean and i feel bad writing this post but GEEZ i don't know what you were thinking
people always say you have bad execution and that's exactly what this is, good ideas, bad execution