HTOTM: FUSION
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The music fitted in pretty well, alright camera angles, and overall a nice job.
Between 4-6 bugged me though, not quite sure why.
[19:59] <Lazors> man it's a good thing people don't see what i write here
Thanks, there's also some black bars in there im so good you cant notice
work on keyframing camera paths jeeeesus
Originally Posted by Kaneki333 View Post
I'm Brazilian, i'm alredy fucked every day i wake up

freecam and keyframing need a looooot of work, your paths for the keyframes don't make any sense at all. take a look at some other videos that have good keyframe positioning (tyzi, slycooper, avi), because your camera takes away from the entire video and makes it look a lot worse than it could potentially be.

whatever the effect at the top of the screen is looks really weird and doesn't fit well, and a lot of the video seemed to be off sync-wise. personally wasn't a fan of the shader choice either, seemed kind of bland.
Originally Posted by Faint View Post
freecam and keyframing need a looooot of work, your paths for the keyframes don't make any sense at all. take a look at some other videos that have good keyframe positioning (tyzi, slycooper, avi), because your camera takes away from the entire video and makes it look a lot worse than it could potentially be.

whatever the effect at the top of the screen is looks really weird and doesn't fit well, and a lot of the video seemed to be off sync-wise. personally wasn't a fan of the shader choice either, seemed kind of bland.

All this, the camera angles don't really showcase the action most of the time, and they're really slow and boring.
I agree that the shader choice wasn't really that great, but you could've made it work. The cc was bland, it looked like it was just contrast and sharpen to me.
Also, I really didn't like how at 0:08 there was almost an entire second of just black screen and at 0:13 there was like almost another entire second. Idk, i notice these things and I didn't like it.

The sync was pretty good, off on some places, but it was generally on-time. The clips overall were too slow for the music though.
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ya basically no cc i cant see the anamorphic flare
Originally Posted by Kaneki333 View Post
I'm Brazilian, i'm alredy fucked every day i wake up

Doesn't really look like shutter streaks* to me, more like some sort of weird mirror effect.
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