Originally Posted by
Faint
freecam and keyframing need a looooot of work, your paths for the keyframes don't make any sense at all. take a look at some other videos that have good keyframe positioning (tyzi, slycooper, avi), because your camera takes away from the entire video and makes it look a lot worse than it could potentially be.
whatever the effect at the top of the screen is looks really weird and doesn't fit well, and a lot of the video seemed to be off sync-wise. personally wasn't a fan of the shader choice either, seemed kind of bland.
All this, the camera angles don't really showcase the action most of the time, and they're really slow and boring.
I agree that the shader choice wasn't really that great, but you could've made it work. The cc was bland, it looked like it was just contrast and sharpen to me.
Also, I really didn't like how at 0:08 there was almost an entire second of just black screen and at 0:13 there was like almost another entire second. Idk, i notice these things and I didn't like it.
The sync was pretty good, off on some places, but it was generally on-time. The clips overall were too slow for the music though.