Hi.
Wanted to try making replays on a regular basis and I thought more experienced people could help.
Cnc please~
Thanks

Serendipitous:

Counterspin in the opener but it wasn't too bad I guess

Double kick to get the 2dms was quite cool but you hit your shin

Glute kick was nice but messy as hell dammit use your feet and not your shin

Back kick arm DM was cool I guess

Ew shin DM again

Pose was cool

Too much grab imo but the destruction was good


Tried to Pusga:

Manip was weirdly twitchy but you got a good speed on Uke so I'm not complaining

Grab ruined the flow

DMs were nice and stuff, second kick could have gotten a boom though and have been much cleaner if you ghosted your leg

Arm rip and stuff was nice

you did good, alltough in both replays i didnt like that your kicks where not looking very precisioned. they just looked like you flapping your legs all over the place. otherwise it good. keep it up mate