you have a lot of potential, keep up the good work.
some parts were a bit laggy so there are some plugins that would help *cough* *twitxor*
or you could just record things at a higher fps if that possible

hohohoo, i'm da best Thanks man :>
I download the *cough* *twitxor* but it gave error :<

The color correction was way too bright, try to tone it down a bit
as for the actual editing, i didn't see much of it, replay was too slow for the song imo.
Either way, keep it up, you have potential c;

ohh, thanks dude.
I'll continue the video... i guess

Don't try to stretch a replay too long, you might want to try using mulitple replays

Also try to sync every movement in the replay instead of having the bit before the drop slow and the bit after fast

Its nice start life. Try not bright it too much like that.
And smooth the light rays at the end.
Also, if you dont have twix, try to record the replay in slow velocity..