Toribash
Ok.

I thought these were pretty good, especially since they're your first replays on this thread. No internet was kind of interesting, but tricking should really only be done on -30 gravity. The fluidity was decent and the flips weren't bad.

Contradiction was good but not great. The flips were good but I feel like you should loosen up your arms a bit, they're tucked in too much. Later on in the replay some of the jumps looked out of place but they were still good. I think you should have worked a bit more on getting that decap rather than trying and failing twice. Anyway, good job. You'll only go up from here and you're doing well for yourself already.

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