Hi people, I made a little song whit some sound of toribash (sorry if copyright, just playing whit new program).

You can hear it here:

https://soundcloud.com/playerowl/gg-20014

Opionions?

I'd say it's not too bad for a first song, but you have a lot of stuff to improve on.
You should definitely learn some music theory, since all the melodic part of the song seemed cacophonic(or whatever the word was).
Also, some sounds (especially that high-pitched one) actually hurt my ears.

The name of the program is FL Studio 11.

Thans for the hint of learn music theory, Arthur. I'll get to it.