The painting on the paper is a sketch to draw after and to the right is a Toribash character

if you'd like some real cnc for this, its probably better to put this in the art board next time.
lines aren't that smooth and camera makes it very difficult to see.

I agree with skylar. This looks like it has been rushed, the hands aren't the same size or even close to the same size, legs are way too thin. never try to free hand when you can easily use basic vectors to aid with your lines.