Toribash
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PS Replayss <3
Oh man, I haven't made one of these in a long time! Anyways here are some replays.
The elbow drop one is old but ish cool. <3
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PS - This is nice.rpl (164.2 KB, 21 views)
PS - Boop.rpl (426.1 KB, 29 views)
PS - Elbow Drop (Old).rpl (167.6 KB, 15 views)
woah chill.
okay so overall its pretty nice

but you are super twitchy

dms are good but quite weak and slow

love the pec dm and the spin after the decap in boop

watch your wrists they are weird looking
Giving a "hand" for skeets.
This is nice: Nice opener. Decent decap. Not much special dm wise. It was smooth, I like that. Uke's head hit your head, that should be avoided. I liked how you kicked it away. Pose was meh, it's hard to really do much with a relaxed pose. Hold your neck.

Boop: Cool opener. Simple but effective. I kind of liked that the hits were really really light. Kind of a cool flare at the end. Hold your neck. Thought this was hacked at first (it's not). Well done.

Elbow Drop: Interesting, but generally slow. Kind of a cool drop. Not much else to say except work on your transition to poses. Hold your neck.

Over all, I really enjoyed these! Well done. I hope you continue.
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This was supposed to be a madman replay, but I ended up doing some cool moves.
Looks sexy though. x)
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I made sure I held my neck! Skywhale <3
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PS - Sexy Moves.rpl (165.0 KB, 20 views)
Last edited by PubicSoup; Oct 11, 2014 at 03:00 AM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
woah chill.
Disslike it because you dident get a dm
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really sloppy, what I would have done
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♥Team Aikido♦OoT♣Team Lenshu♠
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Sexy Moves: This opener was really cool. If it were -9.82 you could get some really good manipulation out of it. I would have liked some dms, but the flare was kind of cool. You're really smooth and fluid with your movements which is good. A little jittery getting the pose, but the pose was great, good job.

Sexy Moves2: A little sloppy, but breakdancing is hard. Decent pose again.

This is cool: I think this was your better breakdancing replay. It's a shame you hit your head on a spin. Strange way to get the decap, but it worked. I liked how you held Uke's head in your knee while posing.

Thanks for holding your neck this time XD
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