Not a bad video, glad to see some old school full-length vid-making again!
The freecamming needs a bit of work - for example there were a couple of moments where it unnecessarily went under the floor and several parts where the player wasn't fully on-screen, which makes it slightly less satisfying to watch. It's fairly easy to correct this though, so I'm sure you'll do better next time!
Also, the tempo of the video didn't really seem to match the song all the way through - the song you chose has faster parts and slower parts, which you could have made use of more by changing the speed of the replays, the brightness of the shaders you chose etc. Using sync this way removes the need to overuse annoying effects and too many camera shakes (I too was always guilty of this).
The replays were overall pretty good, maybe slightly more variety next time would be nice though - perhaps a few less madmans and a couple more spars or parkours?
But yeh, good work and I hope to see more from you.