Ok, I'll give this a shot.
Effort Equals opportunity- When you had the the double grab you didn't do much at all but stand still. I highly recommend to never do that, EVER. You could went for a punch in the mid section or kick Uke's legs, and much much more.
Luxun7 v. AreoMD - Well this was a mod I don't have so You were floating in the air for me.. Please put the mod when you use one to make a replay.
Overall- You need to work on flow and being fluid. DM's are not everything. I'd personally give you a 4/10 because you were kind of smooth, but you need to be a bit more fluid.