Originally Posted by xFlame

omg guys.. pick a clan that wud show to a fight -.- i say if we shud war these shud be the people:

Relax All
Phantom
Dat
TTF
Urban
BNCY
Discount_Death
Mafia
Most wanted
No
MAD
Rawr**look this iz you
Sheep

Originally Posted by Darkslayerx

Something annoying that I couldn't be fucked to read, seeing as Siku's post seemed to make it clear what will happen to this thread.

Originally Posted by EchoMarine

Okay, for the last f**king time!
Darkslayerx!
We have made that list, because everytime we had a clan war, the other clan dosn't show up, so we made that list, that tells us the clans who will be there, so everybody in that list we called them good

Originally Posted by EchoMarine

Yes, thank you for embarrassing me, (1) I was in a rush, since he spammed this on every clan

Originally Posted by gill066

We have made that list, (1) because everytime (2) we had (3) a clan war, the other clan dosn't (4) show up, so we made that list, (5) that tells us the clans who will be there, (6) so everybody in that list we called them (7) good.

1. Do not use a comma after an introductory phrase before a long clause.
2. Do not conjoin "every" and "time."
3. Use the phrase "have had" instead of "had," as "had" implies a singular instance as opposed to a more frequent occurrence.
4. "Dosn't" is not a word. "Doesn't" is.
5. Do not use a comma between an independent and a defendant clause.
6. This is a good point to end your sentence. This is a run-on. Periods are your friend.
7. The use of "them" is redundant; you have already made it clear you are referring to "everybody in that list."

Originally Posted by gill066

1. This is a run-on sentence; however, this is easily corrected by using a period in place of this comma.