I'll be posting any decent replays I churn out in this thread.

Alright, since no one's posting here's another one

not very fluid u had a decent opener for a beginner but you didn't really use it in the best way the dm wasn't bad and there wasn't really a good flow

Sup
Swoopkick:
The opener was really rare. The way you pushed off the ground was pretty akward, it comes from nowhere. Your chest was turning and then blocked, which cuts fluidity.
I think that you can do much more better than this.
The kick was ok, nothing to highlight about it.
The pose could be better, your leftarm looks stiff (relax that). I'd preffer the pose before you contract your knee, it looks better. Poses with only 2 bases (both hands or foots) look better. It shows balance.

Keep it up!

Thanks for the feedback!

I've taken it and made something I think is alright, not that much a fan of the decap but I'm happy with the rest

Bumping with another slightly more spinny replay.

Another one!

More!

I need to be...The movement/momentum/flow/positioning you had was pretty crappy but you got good movement on uke and you were able to do a good job dismembering him but your lower half only knee'd one hip dismember and that made me sad. Good ideas. Keep working at it.

i need to be in two places at oneseses

weird but funny.... and weird xD

All I do is Spin and Win

really nice spins o.0 and the hits were amaizing

Swish

really cool and floppy but i dont like the look of the fully contracted elbows.