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Nibs - Empathy Demo
Hey everybody! I'm back to pester you with my music again!

I recorded and fiddled around with one of the songs of my upcoming debut album, "The rain's just a cover", which should be coming out sometime at the end of this year.

The song is called Empathy, and has a secret third verse that I probably won't fit in to the actual song when we finally produce the disc. I just thought I would record something today as a demonstration for what is to come!

Hope you enjoy

https://soundcloud.com/nibsone/empathy-demo
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The breaths you take are too often, and too pronounced. The audio quality is also very..questionable. Beat was rather repetitive, and might as well have not even existed.
At points, you seem to just be rambling on incoherently, and the lyrics aren't prominent enough. And when you fucked with the pitch of you voice. Oh. Was it awful to listen to.
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Originally Posted by Valterain1 View Post
The breaths you take are too often, and too pronounced. The audio quality is also very..questionable. Beat was rather repetitive, and might as well have not even existed.
At points, you seem to just be rambling on incoherently, and the lyrics aren't prominent enough. And when you fucked with the pitch of you voice. Oh. Was it awful to listen to.

damn dude

admittedly i didn't enjoy it much either.
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Cool! Thankyou! How did my dick taste?

oh come on
it's not our fault that you're incapable of making decent music.

you can improve, you have my faith!!!

nvm holy fuck
I listened to it again.
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hahah I really don't understand. should listen to my actual produced demo in that other thread.
So on the tangent of "I'm inapable of making decent music", how am I supposed to "improve" through your "faith"?

Isn't that a tad contradictory? Maybe a little sarcastic and degrading? Purposely being a cunt?

Edit: PS, I'm not angry at you for constructively criticizing. I'm not actually a self indulged narcissist. I just like arguing.
Seriously, I'm glad you guys even took thirty seconds out of your day to listen to my music. Thank you!
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Originally Posted by Peter View Post
Isn't that a tad contradictory? Maybe a little sarcastic and degrading? Purposely being a cunt?

i think you may be on something there, friend.
follow your dreams.

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Edit: PS, I'm not angry at you for constructively criticizing. I'm not actually a self indulged narcissist. I just like arguing.
Seriously, I'm glad you guys even took thirty seconds out of your day to listen to my music. Thank you!

ok im sorry for being a rude cunt
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