Really good work for a first video, you've got the basics down

Freecam was decent enough at following the tori (Something that most people starting out can't really do) but it wasn't really dynamic. You could try having the camera take a path around the tori rather than just moving in one direction. It'll take a bit of practice but it'll really add to your videos once you get the hang of it

I'd suggest right clicking on your clips and selecting "Disable resample". This gets rid of the effect you see during fast movements where SV tries to blend together two frames to make it seem smoother. After that, you might consider getting RSMB (ReelSmart Motion Blur) to replace it, which really makes everything in the video seem a million times smoother.

Your sync was more or less on point, great job there

Screen pumps weren't perfect but they were executed rather nicely compared to most of the other videos with them that I've seen. Experimenting with fast/slow keyframes may help polish them a little further


Also it's just my opinion but you should really have more madman replays in a song like this where there are so many opportunities for you to use them. Tricking replays are good but not when they outnumber the madman ones

It seemed to me that there was a small black line on the bottom of the screen sometimes.
The black flash at one point was out of place.
Otherwise for a first edit that was very good.