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I'm not sure if you want comments on your dancing or on the actual editing of the video.
If we're talking about the editing here, you might want to try switching up the camera angles now and then or actually incorporating far more animation into the vid than you did
Dance was good. You should add more effects if you call it animation dance but still nice.
Also I dont think Art section is Toribash content only. There's pople sharing their drawings, sounds/musics, game videos etc.
you had some good dance moves, but i stopped before i finished the video
you should use effects when there aren't any black bars or crop it to the video
apart from that, it's art but not the kind of art we want to see (toribash montages, etc.)