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the idea is good, you should use long lines instead of "chicken scratches" or sketchy lines.
If you use Paint tool Sai theres a stabilizer option than can help with that. Keep it up!
Not much we can say at this point.
cant comment on line work its a sketch.
id make the eyes alittle ovalish if you want them to be circles ingame
i can give you digital art tips if you want pm me
i suggest just focus on the face for now get a foundation down then expand to the rest of the head once the ideas have come flowing