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[Tex]It's really hard to not drawing my usual style.



Comment and Critics is needed!
Program used is Gimp 2.6 as always.
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well, it looks pretty nice, did you make one side and mirrored the other? still pretty cool tho
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its cool, you shading is good, your work is cartoony so you can do pretty much a bunch of stuff without leaving your safezone
i would suggest putting the little thing above the eyes in the center red, it would look cool
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May 22, 2015 Old
You always have clean lines which is good.
The overall design i feel needs editing
The visor look upsidedown. And kinda looks like its sad
The backside. Its fairly empty consider What cosmetic. Additional could be made.
I suggested changing the visor mapping maybe. Trim. It up
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Looks nice and crisp. However, as Calamity pointed out, the visor does look upside-down, and it's lower than where the eyes would normally be. Also personally I don't like to mix straight lines and simple angular shapes with curved lines and smooth shapes, at least when one type greatly outnumbers the other type. All the features of your head are angular except for those little black horn-looking things above the visor, and that bothers me a bit. I'd either make them angular as well also or get rid of them, but that's just my personal preference.
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Originally Posted by audykhamis View Post
That Just Looks Perfect I Really Like It

Thanks.
Originally Posted by eki27 View Post
well, it looks pretty nice, did you make one side and mirrored the other? still pretty cool tho

Thanks, and yes.
Originally Posted by kradoxtb View Post
its cool, you shading is good, your work is cartoony so you can do pretty much a bunch of stuff without leaving your safezone
i would suggest putting the little thing above the eyes in the center red, it would look cool

Let's see.

Too small, rofl.


Originally Posted by Calamity View Post
You always have clean lines which is good.
The overall design i feel needs editing
The visor look upsidedown. And kinda looks like its sad
The backside. Its fairly empty consider What cosmetic. Additional could be made.
I suggested changing the visor mapping maybe. Trim. It up

I'll do it in my next head. Finding suited additionals is hard, got something? For a robotic styled head.
Thank you for the comments and suggestions!
Originally Posted by Odlov View Post
Looks nice and crisp. However, as Calamity pointed out, the visor does look upside-down, and it's lower than where the eyes would normally be. Also personally I don't like to mix straight lines and simple angular shapes with curved lines and smooth shapes, at least when one type greatly outnumbers the other type. All the features of your head are angular except for those little black horn-looking things above the visor, and that bothers me a bit. I'd either make them angular as well also or get rid of them, but that's just my personal preference.

Oh, so that's why it looks a kind of weird, bold words is the reason.
Well, I feel kinda weird tho when I saw the completed version of it, something is just wrong, so that's it. Thank you for reminding me!
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I told you rai to use your own styleeee
But I like it. Its just look like enma's style, you just sucessfully copy his style
Good job, I don't really like the visor :/
Just flip the visor upside down, it'll nice

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Originally Posted by Azion View Post
I told you rai to use your own styleeee
But I like it. Its just look like enma's style, you just sucessfully copy his style
Good job, I don't really like the visor :/
Just flip the visor upside down, it'll nice

It's not enma's.
Enma is a lot more better than me, I tried random things and it turned out like this.
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