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[Tex] Wizard Set - Feedback and Ideas?!
Hey!
I've been making heads for a while, without getting almost any good feedback on them. I accepted a set request some days ago but the owner changed his mind so everything's on my hands now... and yours.

I'd be glad to read feedback or any suggestions, ideas, or just anything that comes to your mind for the other body-parts! Help me make this a nice set <3

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I'm using Adobe Illustrator for the texturing and Photoshop for mirroring and some effects.

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Is that beam on both of the hands? It looks epic tho.
Add magic stick on the thigh.
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Originally Posted by Raiken View Post
Is that beam on both of the hands? It looks epic tho.
Add magic stick on the thigh.

Yeah, I'll mirror the whole set unless someone gives me a sick idea. And I thought of that, I'm probably gonna make it on one of the thighs, thanks!

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Wizard beard not wizardly enough, needs to be tangled and wilder. I also don't like how you covered his entire head with that hood and coloured his face a solid black. You can keep the idea of the hood but I suggest you reveal his face, add glowy magician eyes, runic symbols beneath one of his eyes. Ofc you don't have to add everything I've said, I'm just spitting ideas.

Hands look p cool but green looks disgusting, slime balls? Idk I just don't like the idea of that, I suggest you make it purple and let it glow or it could be streaming down his hands, like liquid magic. Also, don't forget the wrinkles on the guy, you chose to make him an old wizard with that beard, he shouldn't be having a teenager's hands.

It's nice to see someone else using Adobe Illustrator. Good luck with the set.
Pinkie looks odd the way it's wrapping around the hand, the scar? on the right eye looks really odd too. Beard needs to be scragglier.
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Originally Posted by audykhamis View Post
i think you should make a hole in his thigh and like a beam water in it i think it would look cool

What's a beam water? You mean like something flowing down his thigh?

Originally Posted by iAwesome View Post
Wizard beard not wizardly enough, needs to be tangled and wilder. I also don't like how you covered his entire head with that hood and coloured his face a solid black. You can keep the idea of the hood but I suggest you reveal his face, add glowy magician eyes, runic symbols beneath one of his eyes. Ofc you don't have to add everything I've said, I'm just spitting ideas.

Hands look p cool but green looks disgusting, slime balls? Idk I just don't like the idea of that, I suggest you make it purple and let it glow or it could be streaming down his hands, like liquid magic. Also, don't forget the wrinkles on the guy, you chose to make him an old wizard with that beard, he shouldn't be having a teenager's hands.

It's nice to see someone else using Adobe Illustrator. Good luck with the set.

I thought about revealing his face, yes, but I'm not the best at them so I thought making a dark hood would look better. I'll try to do a version without the solid black. I might as well redo the beard :P

I was going for something like magical orbs on the hands, and I like the idea of some liquid coming out of them streaming through the hands! And yeah, I hadn't thought about the wrinkles, I'll use that.

I find Illustrator much easier for this kind of things than Photoshop, thanks for the CnC!

Originally Posted by Valterain1 View Post
Pinkie looks odd the way it's wrapping around the hand, the scar? on the right eye looks really odd too. Beard needs to be scragglier.

Pinkie looks a bit odd, I know. Mapping the hand to make it grab something was hard and I didn't want all the fingers together. The pinkie looks better in other camera angles though, the picture makes it weirder. For the eyes, I'll redo them with all the face to see what comes out, and yeah, scragglier beard as well.

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