Opener wasn't spectacular, you didnt have much room to move because of how close you were to uke, so you couldnt build momentum at all.
the dms weren't good, the build up to a dismemberment is what makes it impressive, not the fact you just broke his arm.
alot of movement was wasted and un-needed.
too much grabbing, try to avoid grabbing onto uke for more than 30 frames if you can help it.
Try setting the engage distance higher, and the match frames, and using shift+space(at the same time) to go by 1 frame at a time to land hits easier.
Also try editing replays to avoid un-needed movement(to do this press e when watching a replay, when doing this save lots of work in progress replays so if you press e at the wrong time you can just go back).