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xjmc's replay thread of Uke bashing \o/
'Ayyyy

W.I.P

And some replays
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xjmc - Remyroo.rpl (241.9 KB, 25 views)
xjmc - Aleakr.rpl (176.5 KB, 31 views)
hi xj, it's me. i was curious to see one of your replays :3 although im not the best CnCer

Aleakr: really nice replay, i didn't know you were a replay maker :P

You were good with the fluidity, but you seemed to had trouble with the pose

Remyroo: You really love spinning openers dont you? The combo was really good, but i didnt like the way you stopped after your first DM, momentum was wasted. But, still cool.

Hope to see more :P
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Thanks, eki

I appreciate your CnC.

Spinny openers is my thang (I think)

EDIT: WIP 2
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ze wippaz.rpl (209.7 KB, 19 views)
Last edited by xjmc; Jun 12, 2015 at 08:10 AM.
Spiny openers are the shit.

Aleakr:

Really nice replay.
The opener was amazing. It was really fluid and smooth. Well done.
Follow up punches were ok. I didn't really see the point of that 1st one, but it did look sweet.
Second kick was lovely. I really love the DMs.
Transition to pose, and pose itself was good.
Nicely done.

Remyroo:

Opener in this one was a bit slow in the beginning, but you followed really well with that spin. And I like spins.
Split was nice.
However, I'm not quite fond of how you followed. You waited a bit before the jump(this is not a big deal though) and that grab was kinda misplaced. You bumped your head as well. :C
I must say, I really liked the flurry of kicks you did. They were fast and precise. Good job with them.
And again, pose was nice.

Overall, pretty sweet replays. I'm looking forward to seeing more from you.
ORMO|Replays n' stuff|RIP Monk
Originally Posted by GrAmOf0n View Post
Spiny openers are the shit.

Aleakr:

Really nice replay.
The opener was amazing. It was really fluid and smooth. Well done.
Follow up punches were ok. I didn't really see the point of that 1st one, but it did look sweet.
Second kick was lovely. I really love the DMs.
Transition to pose, and pose itself was good.
Nicely done.

Remyroo:

Opener in this one was a bit slow in the beginning, but you followed really well with that spin. And I like spins.
Split was nice.
However, I'm not quite fond of how you followed. You waited a bit before the jump(this is not a big deal though) and that grab was kinda misplaced. You bumped your head as well. :C
I must say, I really liked the flurry of kicks you did. They were fast and precise. Good job with them.
And again, pose was nice.

Overall, pretty sweet replays. I'm looking forward to seeing more from you.


No comments on my WIP?

Thnx for the CnC o/
Commenting on your wippas
I cant call that a manip, because manip in manip you spin uke in the air rather than keeping him there. So I'll call it juggling, like larfen does. So the moves were pretty fine, although it seemed too forced at points where you abandoned flow to keep uke in the air. Also I didn't like how you just kinda stopped at around 760 and then almost struggled on what to do next, you kinda went back and forth. The kick itself I liked, it was pretty clean and you kept the speed after it, which means that you could've gotten more dms I think, but gj on that nonetheless.
golf
Thanks Assassin

And yes you're right I had stuggle cuz it's my first time making a manip or juggle

Thanks, again
Decided to scrap the juggle replay because it was very hard to continue

Also New WIP
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zewdasd.rpl (63.0 KB, 10 views)
'Ayyyy, been a while

Apparently I've been studying hard which isn't normal.

New replay \o/

With the "5-turn extended glutes" opener
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xjmc - Pedestrious Anosamous.rpl (201.1 KB, 14 views)
Neat.

The opener.....god dammit.....that's the most common and overused opener ever.
But ok...never mind.
Knee DM was ok. Nothing too spectacular. You executed it quite nicely.
Same goes for the follow up hip DM.
3rd kick was nice. Nothing much to say about it.
Transition to the boom was sweet. I liked the way you grabbed Uke just on the right place which allowed ya to get that boom.
Which was really neat. You could have gotten the decap though.
Pose was interesting. You ghosted your arm through your leg though. However, I don't find that a big issue.
Anyways, to wrap it up, this was pretty nice replay. Your DMs are really neat.
Keep up with the good work buddy, looking forward to seeing more replays by you.
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