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dat stinkface. she looks annoyed.
well done on making it actually look like a girl, but theres something really off about the face.
distance between the mouth and the nose is too far.
eyes are mapped correctly for the sphere, but not correctly for a face, the gap between the corner of the eye and the nose is too far. only solution for this is to make the eye bigger and move it inwards, then hope it still maps well.
shading of the nose is (to use a term that the gata boys use on my work all the time) quite pillowy.
jaw is very square and chin is very thin. if you moved the mouth up it would solve the one problem, but you'd still want to rework the jaw line.
face in general needs more depth.
skin tones are excellent though, which is something i really struggle with. bringing in the pinks and oranges to the skin is something i just cant get right. if anything, i want more of that.
what youve done with the hair sofar is excellent, another thing i suck at.
it looks soft and feathery and fluffy, looks legit, even with the limited amouth of work youve done on it.
the design around the helmet is super legit, maps nicely and looks pretty etc.
but the overall shape of the helmet just looks awkward.
no vertical elements, it just maps in a circle around the head, horizontally, the arches over the eyes arch too high and the helmet design just lacks depth and levels.
vertical elements, depth and sculpting, with detailing like youve done sofar
eg: what we did in gata http://forum.toribash.com/showthread...=454243&page=8
well done on making it actually look like a girl, but theres something really off about the face.
distance between the mouth and the nose is too far.
eyes are mapped correctly for the sphere, but not correctly for a face, the gap between the corner of the eye and the nose is too far. only solution for this is to make the eye bigger and move it inwards, then hope it still maps well.
shading of the nose is (to use a term that the gata boys use on my work all the time) quite pillowy.
jaw is very square and chin is very thin. if you moved the mouth up it would solve the one problem, but you'd still want to rework the jaw line.
face in general needs more depth.
skin tones are excellent though, which is something i really struggle with. bringing in the pinks and oranges to the skin is something i just cant get right. if anything, i want more of that.
what youve done with the hair sofar is excellent, another thing i suck at.
it looks soft and feathery and fluffy, looks legit, even with the limited amouth of work youve done on it.
the design around the helmet is super legit, maps nicely and looks pretty etc.
but the overall shape of the helmet just looks awkward.
no vertical elements, it just maps in a circle around the head, horizontally, the arches over the eyes arch too high and the helmet design just lacks depth and levels.
vertical elements, depth and sculpting, with detailing like youve done sofar
eg: what we did in gata http://forum.toribash.com/showthread...=454243&page=8
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I'd have to agree with BenDover about the gao between the nose and the mouth it's a bit far apart. Also I don't think the nostrils look quite right or the bottom bridge of the nose where it connects to the upper lip.
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I don't like the way you made the nose
The first shadings look fine than the second, you way too much added the shadings, you made the head looks like an old lady.
The rest are fine
The first shadings look fine than the second, you way too much added the shadings, you made the head looks like an old lady.
The rest are fine
Last edited by Saiko; Jun 29, 2015 at 08:36 AM.
Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
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