Programs Used:
-Toribash
-Sony Vegas Pro 13
-Fraps
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I think you should use more effects and move your camera more frequently.

You should probably tone down the music a bit and remove the hit sounds. >.<

Turn off resample

If you want it to be a showcase with hit sounds you should make the song softer so we can actually hear things

While you're at it try and get some higher quality sound packs, these sound a bit off

Honestly your song choice isn't the best and the way you fit the stuff together isn't really that great

You should watch some of Matarika's videos or Mocu's earlier videos, those seem to have the style you're aiming for

i don't think this was the best editing-wise, but it kept me entertained and isn't bad enough for me to quit watching it

good job for a first video

at 1:07. Its too high my headphones almost died of that sound. Awesome video btw. Work on it, more flow sync ect. Welldone 7/10

Thank you for the constructive comments next video I'll try to do everything you told me and try to improve every video thanks for support staff!

for those who want to take a look on mobile advices.

Did you edit in the blood falling and the particles floating around?
if you did, you should try to make one that looks like they are fighting in a snow blizzard