Hey guys I made my first video.

Ofcource it can be improved on(alot).

So I would like it if you guys could point out the things I need to do better.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UL9_GP0hs9Q

Also I need some editing software that is capable. As i used movie maker.

But Im broke :3

Any suggestions?

keyframing please. dont just use wasd while recording.

also sync.

Fact is i made it with keyframes, What do i do wrong D:

if you use key frame, keep the camera close to the hits, it will give a cool effect

Could you expand on that please.
Do you mean zooming in on hits or
Making the camera follow them?

Opt blood 0, opt bloodstains 0, opt bruise 0, and opt trails 0. Use hq graphics so it looks nicer, if your computer cant handle the hq graphics then just make it slow then go in whatever program you use and speed it up. Highly recommend reading datskips tutorial - http://forum.toribash.com/showthread.php?t=503457. The shader is ugly aswell.

Change shader, get better replays, keyframe closer to the tori. Speed up before a kick, not slow down.