Try using different shader, lighting was good, and editing was good so

8/10

Freecam was nice

I'm not sure if AVS video editor has a method of speeding up and slowing down clips to specific speeds but you need to do that if you want to make a video so either learn to do it with what you have or get a new editing program

The CC was kinda ugly, sorry

Also remember to add the [VID] tag next time

Ah yes I forgot to add that tag. Sorry.
Yes you can speed clips up and down and cut them and what not.
Also I will try to come up with a different CC next time. Thanks for the CnC.

Seemed like the fps was a little low at the start and also the black background made me think Liar only had one arm.. looked odd.. Also it felt like I was watching a black screen for too long between transitions.