Intro was cute
around 14-16 sec the camera was doing weird shit.
not sure if you sped up the boring bits on the tricking intentionally or not, but the only bits all I could was them launching.
text at 0:58 was off putting, and really didn't match the editing style you're trying to do.
WTF HAPPENED TO THE AUDIO AT 1:00
Transition isn't great, but the freecam is pretty much perfect.
ending is weird