heeeyy that was pretty nice

if there's anything i'd point out that you're good at it's camera angles
something i noticed about most of the pauses though is that the tori is shaking, almost violently. not sure if it was intentional or not, but it just looks really odd to me. didn't take too much away from the video for me, but y'know. bugged me.

music choice was pretty nice too, though it felt a little out of place considering it's build-up/"rising action" music and this was simply a display of parkour

speaking of parkour, i found that really well done as well. double backflip thing around 18 seconds was pretty sick.

good stuff

I got to say, you're getting better really fast.

maybe dont go to slow. Maybe about 10-20% more speed that you slowed. Becouse it looks stiff, and with that, add smooth transitions to it. So it does not slow in .1 second. But it was good tho. The style the music was good .

I noticed this too, were you trying to record the replay in less than 100% speed? (Slowing down the clip in game) Doing so kinda messes up the freecam and makes it look really twitchy so I'd suggest just recording at normal speed

You should change speed of overlay when you change speed of the replay to fit with it.
Nice music choice.

The rest is already said.

i was going to change the speed of the overlay, but the overlay got really laggy when slowed down.

Epileptic again, cut the clip if the camera goes too quickly.
Do a proper ending.